Place I want to be

My heart seeks that place,

where the mind finds solace;

the soul is freed,

of the chains – unbodied;

liberated from the judging scorn,

a new creature born;

where wings can fly,

without thoughts wry;

the land where I can be me,

that is the place where I want to be!

In response to 

Daily prompt: Places

Beach, mountain, forest, or somewhere else entirely?



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  3. rohan dikshit · March 18, 2015

    Write more….khamoshiya

    Liked by 1 person

  4. lifeconfusions · March 21, 2015

    Beautifully written. All that we want is to find a place where we can be us. Stay true to ourselves and not get lost. Great post ! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    • Evolving ruminations · March 21, 2015

      Thanks Zee ! I’ll definitely do that – and having great friends always keeps us on track 😀


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