Weekly Haiku Challenge #43: Source and thought

This week’s challenge from Ronovan involved the words source and prompt. Here’s my attempt at the haiku :

Broken

Wrecked heart cannot cope,

with shattered thoughts and crushed soul,

need a source of hope.

How the Haiku is read:

Wrecked heart cannot cope with shattered thoughts and crushed soul.

With shattered thoughts and crushed soul, need a source of hope.

I’ll admit its a bit on the darker side – trying to balance out the lighter ones that I posted last week .

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6 comments

  1. lifeconfusions · May 10, 2015

    Such a well written Haiku, However I hope you are alright? 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Pingback: RonovanWrites Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt Challenge 43 Review | ronovanwrites
  3. Vashti Quiroz-Vega · May 11, 2015

    Life has both dark and light sides––I appreciate both. I love your haiku. It’s beautifully sad. ❤

    Liked by 1 person

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